oh god that was hott! This was so good!

~new here... don't mind meh~

I agrue i'm a little preverted hey I read your story and liked it. 159 stories wow impressed. I'm a big yoai fan, and a pround lesbian.

Fill free to write back.

And cool myspace

I love your syory it was really good I'm glad your freind put it on her page.

Holy sh*t man, that was awsome, besides the fact that their brothers! And that I am straight.

Oh so cute! ^^ I thought that it was really sweet ^^ teeheehee

my god evan! hehe, i felt like writing a review. XD, erm, well, you should have told them it was from Naruto... Ahahaha... oh yea, when i read your lemon of Sasuke and Itachi, I WROTE A LEMON TOO! XD You're so inspiring. heh. Give me some tips sometime, i suck at lemons... Oh yea, i advertised your fic, so, advertise mine too! XD

Oh, I thought this had a very sweet theme going for it. The ending was the best way it could have been for me. I like how you handled the beginning with the uneasiness. Aniki sounds to die for!

By the way, after looking at your profile, I was surprised to learn you live in CT. So do I! It's really rare finding people from my same state... For some really odd reason... I live in the NE part. I just had to share that with you. Pay me no mind.

O.O ...*Speechless*

Um... there's something off about this story... I don't know what but it's not... right.

And I'm not talking about the incest, I have no problem with that (I write it, too). That's fine. It's just that... Oh God, I don't know.

I agree with Limited Edition down there *points at the review under mine*, but there's something more there.

Nice descriptions and language though...give up the Japanese if you don't know Japanese...the spelling wasn't the best, or the realism. BTW...the whole thing was as far from realism that it could get, which kinda was a turn off, and I don't mean it in the sexual way.