very very sad byt potent.

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Gah. That's awful! Horrible! Down right digusting. The writing style was awsome, the story made me cry, but the fact that it's true, that abused children think it's there fault, and that their parents love them. I completely dislike that father. It was a good poem however.

Yeah, it's sad. Sad how kids (and even adults) are abused and they're just confused. It's like they think it's normal to be hurt or it's they're fault that they're the victims of abuse. Well, it was a good poem! Keep on rockin'!

So true...So true...

Oh wow... I'm speechless. It's so sad, but amazing... wonderful job.

Wow. This is incredible writing. It's so sad, creepy (kind of, know what I mean?). I like the separations of where the little stanzas end. It makes it more dramatic, more intense that way. It's perfect, written from the point of view of the little girl. It makes it more emotional, in a way. This is great writing, so good job (though I really hope this isn't autobiographical, because I still hope that nobody in the world will have to go through pain and sadness; naive, innocent, ignorant, yes, but a dream).

this is good..i really feel that this is written by the little gurl...well, i hope that you don't experience the same thing...cos its really really horrible...anyway, i like it..keep writing! btw, why there's no review? it's ok...fame on me... D

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