It's interesting how the message of a poem can mean two very different things, like how you mentioned in the summary. I guess it all just depends on who reads the poem. Well, whatever message it was that you were trying to get across, good job, this is definitely a thought-provoking poem. Take care and keep writing.

EB

Good job, I like this! Excellent! Write on!

Anna _

hmm.. i likey this poem mucho much! it seems a bit painful, but at the same time with a bit of humour... dunno.. its awesome!