That is so freakin true!

Uh. Well. I like the intro. That first line, starting with 'and' that's clever...Please file this under 'angst' though. Anything with the phrase 'black and lifeless' in it, it just wasted in another catagory. My bias doesn't allow me to be too partial to this piece, but it is well written. The 'we lie. not a word is wispered' bit is nice as well. Interesting. And nice fin. It's nice. It reminds me of a couple making out on a bench. You know the type, the ones always sucking face right in front of everyone, like in the mall, and they just don't care that everyone around them is just gagging. Ick. Not that your piece was ickky. It just reminded me of that. Sorry. Yes. Good job.