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| L. A. Solvang 2006-09-04 ch 4,  | abuseI especially love the introduction to the story - it really makes you wondering what will happen to make her write such a note. And even though we don't actually meet any of her family members, we get a good picture of them by the state of their house and Raven's thoughts. This also makes me remember the stupidity of high school. :D I can't wait to see what will happen later. |
| Restless Thoughts 2006-08-19 ch 4, | abuseThis is wonderful. I like your style of writing. Update soon, please! |
| DarcyNussey 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThis notes so emontional :( but great :) |
| DarcyNussey 2006-08-13 ch 2, | abuseAs short as this chapter is its still good, keep it up x |
| DarcyNussey 2006-08-13 ch 3, | abuseThis chapted great! Its definatly longer and has more adjectives than the last, well done x |
| DarcyNussey 2006-08-13 ch 4, | abuseThere isnt really much difference to this chapter, but its still great, good look with the of your chapted and work. |
| Neko92 2006-06-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseGood job! ^_^ Its getting good man! |
| firestar267 2006-06-10 ch 4, | abuseHiya this is a really good chapter, keep up the good work and update soon! |
| Darcy666 2006-06-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi, this chapters pretty good,the story will probably become even better as it moves on judging by your prologue! Darcy x |
| Darcy666 2006-06-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseHeya, again a brilliant chapter, although i spotted i few mistakes that i already pointed out :) good luck and keep up the good work |
| Jonathan Kimberley 2006-06-10 ch 4, | abuseA Nice Re-Write, Keep Up The Work. I Love This Story. |
| Darcy666 2006-06-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseHeya, i think this story is very well improved. The old one was good but this one has more detailDarcy x |
| Neko92 2006-06-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseGood job! ^_^ Please do more!! |
| Limited Edition 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, a good start. But the summary sounded almost silly since there were so many problems! There isn't much needed to break down a person so take it easy with the angst XD |
| Jonathan Kimberley 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abusei began reading this before and i was really enjoying it. althoughi didnt manage to finish it before i am really lookin foward to how this turns out again :D |