I especially love the introduction to the story - it really makes you wondering what will happen to make her write such a note. And even though we don't actually meet any of her family members, we get a good picture of them by the state of their house and Raven's thoughts. This also makes me remember the stupidity of high school. :D I can't wait to see what will happen later.

This is wonderful. I like your style of writing. Update soon, please!

This notes so emontional :( but great :)

As short as this chapter is its still good, keep it up x

This chapted great! Its definatly longer and has more adjectives than the last, well done x

There isnt really much difference to this chapter, but its still great, good look with the of your chapted and work.

Good job! ^_^ Its getting good man!

Hiya this is a really good chapter, keep up the good work and update soon!

Hi, this chapters pretty good,the story will probably become even better as it moves on judging by your prologue! Darcy x

Heya, again a brilliant chapter, although i spotted i few mistakes that i already pointed out :) good luck and keep up the good work

A Nice Re-Write, Keep Up The Work. I Love This Story.

Heya, i think this story is very well improved. The old one was good but this one has more detailDarcy x

Good job! ^_^ Please do more!!

Very well written, a good start. But the summary sounded almost silly since there were so many problems! There isn't much needed to break down a person so take it easy with the angst XD

i began reading this before and i was really enjoying it. althoughi didnt manage to finish it before i am really lookin foward to how this turns out again :D