Wow, I love it! Very intennse and suspenseful, and it's kinda nice to see something that original in the horror section. I loved it, you should definently do more.

If everyone in the world was sane, the world would no londer be fun... however this was a great short story, even if it was based off a dream. Keep writing ash, i will be waiting for the next!Selly

God...reading that really put me in the story. The kid with the birthday had stood out the most. It was short, but it was probably more powerful than alot of other stuff ive seen. Hope to see more of your stuff soon!

Very depressing, I love