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| The Ferrett 2007-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseCurious and dark, extremely detailed while being... fluid. Interesting. |
| some random /b/tard 2006-05-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou know, maybe it would be better if you somehow switched the order of the chapters or just threw the first one out altogether somehow, because it's a pain to read. Really, I only read it because we're partners in depravity, but I wouldn't force people to read stuff that has such sucky grammar and spelling, even though I know it was intentional. The latter chapter was pretty darn good, though. No complaints, easy on the eyes, reading goes through smoothly. |