this is really sad. i'm sorry. i love the way you wrote this though, especially the first stanza. really good. was 'cur' supposed to be 'cure' or something? it didnt sound right. maybe i just am stupid and don't know that word, tho. lol.

dark & beautiful. wonderful job! i especially love the title.

This is brilliant. Some people really over use bold/italics/underlining but I think you used it well; it really adds to the poem. I loved how raw this is. Keep up the excellent work.

Wow.. very vivid. It's really good though. Filled with a lot of emotion.