 Frostany 2007-10-26 . chapter 7I feel like I'm really getting to know the characters, you're doing a good job developing them and keep my interest, thank you for writing more and thank you for dedicating chapter six to me, that made me feel special. I hope you keep writing, I'm especially interested in what is happening with Alexa and the sudden tears. I also am interested to know whether you're going to do anything else with Mr. Wynter. I found his comment about not thinking perplexing and intriguing. Keep writing. |
 Frostany 2007-10-21 . chapter 5I started reading this story because like Tricia, I live at a program for kids with mental health issues. the story drew me in immediately, it has a powerful beginning and the characters are very three dimmensional and real. I could really picture all of them in my head. I especially like Alexa, Tricia's room mate. I want to learn more about Yvonne the therapist. She seemed to have an influence on Tricia, I'm also curious as to what the other staff at the school are like. I would love to read more on this story, I'm not sure if you were planning on adding to it, but I think you really should. |