*Grins* Ryn, good to know you're writing again.

Can I steal this line? "My path is erratic with transient tangents" :D I really like it!

it's good but a little too simplistic?

i love the line "My path is erratic with transient tangents" but certain lines seem less thought out and more just put there.

also "myselves" should be "myself".

the last six lines are fantastic, just work on a little more descriptive beginning.

.:midnight:.

i'm speechless...this is a beautiful poem...keep on writing! and i hope you find your way back home soon...

Lots Of Love, Hugs n Kisses

Excellent. This is really good! Keep it up!

~Anna~