Reviews for A Tale of Legends

Matt Sheard
2006-05-30
ch 1,

abuseThe imagery is good, the allegory works well. It's got good potential. The rhyming in some places spoils the poem because it doesn't work, and the odd line appears to have been used for the rhyme rather than it's meaning, which is not a good thing. Meaning first, then rhyme. Fit the rhyme into the poem rather than the poem into the rhyme. Some lines are also too short to fit with the rhythem (most notably "But he did not hesitate.")

But don't let those get you down. Take note of them and bare them in mind when you write poetry, the poem is good.

Matt

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