|Reviews for On the Earth|
| cannotthinkofaname 5/30/06 . chapter 1
really, really, really well writtengood rhythm and flowi really like.. i dunno how to express it..the words you used?imagery?whateveri love it!really, really, really good!ending also really fits
| Arichos 5/30/06 . chapter 1
You really are in affinity for nature recently. I love the mood you set in this poem...it's really deep and thought provoking. awesome.
| Mikioda 5/30/06 . chapter 1
Excellent imagery and syllabic use! (sp?)