That was good. I could see that happening. Keep writing!

Ugh, how tear-esque! Though this can be consroed as a blaze-blah romantic aspiration poem, I rather like it for what it is and it's differentiating characteristics. If somebody tells you it's flat out good, their slightly mentally retrded or lying. So I'll let you know that your using too many stereotypical phrases in hear 'you'll always be my love' 'saying we'll always be togtrher' Those kinds of phrases are used so often they lose ALL meaning. But overall I liked the poem and that line 'In the sun-bleached forest, I stood with you' Oh gosh what imagery! Ah la la!

Ciao

ps-review something of mine it may help you...and me!

-Coon

Emotional to the fullest. Such the imaginative poem.