"I have created this metaphoric waste land" This has got to be my favorite line in the poem. Pure brilliance this one is!

The very last line is damned lovely as well. Incrediably true. Too true. Agonizingly true. The truth hurts, doesn't it?

Anyway, I can critic a little, though I don't normally...ahh...I'm in a funny mood though so why not.

The only things I have against this poem is that it's slightly repetitive. Great meaning. And I know, I know. I never pay much attention to my poems. I don't go over them. Just post. But if your into the whole over-rated 'perfection' flip side of things then you could go over this and make it sound a bit smoother.

REGARDS!OO

ANNAANNAANNAAND YESANNA

wow i REALLY relate to this. nice job! i know exactly what you feel