Aha! a general poem! I find these a sign of an inquisitive writer. I have watched your wording go from diamonds in the rough to gems of their own right, and this poem is no exception. the flow is right, the free verse is expressive, and the wording is concise yet whimsical. My only suggestion would lie in the line "sipped by youths lips." Myself, I would put "sipped by young lips." Flows better to my ear. In any case, another job well done, Maddie.

affectionately,
Q

'Spilling with the summer rains' is a great line. I like it, the whole thing. Oh, and 'Creating happy sounds' That's groovy too.

My God this made me want to get up and go back out into the woods ^_^ Beautiful and musically put I really like your style. Thank you for your review of my work also (bows)

this is pretty good, i like the imagery.

I love the imagery you used. It really brings out the best in your poems.

Great job, well done. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

wonderful imagry, very well written, i like it a lot