Normally I'm not a big poetry fan unless it's the classics (Yeats, Shelley, Byron, etc.)

But I liked this. It was cool. :) Once again-NICE WORK.

I love the feeling of this poem, especially at the beginning with the past "clinging to us like lint." I also like the allusion to Kronos at the end... it's really funny the way you use an ancient god to emphasize the importance of the present. Nice work!