Wow, this was wonderfully, BEAUTIFULLY put.

you express pain in such a beauitful way.

I think you think too much

The emphasis on the word think is a highlight to the words as you run through it. Such the tumult of emotions and feelings truly describes real life. Excellently woven.

wow this is really gd .the detail emotion and repittion

and damn i can relate to this so muchits well written and its really gdkeep up the gd workx

I can relate to this very well. Great job, this is one of the best poems I've read in a while.

The repetition is great, and if I were you, I wouldn't change it one bit. I love it just the way it is. K.I.S.S.

I like the roller coaster ride of emotion in this; you express yourself well.

Juliet.