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| emeraude-irlandais 2006-05-31 ch 1,   | It very aptly describes my often-used euphemism that "my poetry is my religion". I love "stuttered light in hidden places"...did it have to rhyme though? Also, "words that die, leave only lotus", seems to be forcing the rhyme scheme. Otherwise, awesome! Keep writin'! `~bella~` |