Actually, I disagree with Christian values, like the belief that to defend yourself is wrong, and also the belief that a just god would punish an entire race for the actions of its first two members.I can and WILL blame Christians for prescribing to a doctrine which is immoral and unreasonable.

But keep writing.

Sadly, that's true. So many fantics ruin the good name of all religions, be they orthodox or otherwise. I know I've suffered because of 'fanatics' that share the same religion-though not beliefs-as me.

pretty cool of u to stand up for what u believe in, but personally, saying that religion is a lie but then saying that God is the real thing is contradictory. if u believe in God, u believe in religion and vice versa. so saying that religion is a lie is incorrect, but i totally agree with the religious fanatics bit. remember, they may believe in the same religion and interpret it differently, so the religion is NOT a lie or incorrect, but the 'fanatics' are. great job tho!

mez

So true!

Hm. As you know I may disagree with part of this...Thanks for reviewing so much of my work!Rowan

Your poem sounds a lot like a concept I've come across myself: "religion is for people who don't want to go to hell for fear. Spirituality is for those who already know what hell is and have risen above it."

if i say that christians are doing something then the people who are doing it are probably christian.

if somebody else feels the need to assume that i'm referring to all christians then that's their problem.

and i'm very happy for people like you who are able to beleive in god and jesus and the "real thing"

but for some of us the world is cold hard fact and there is no heaven after death and there is no savior from our sins. there are only people who beleive there is and those people are people too and they do things.

Christians do do things.

nobody ever said that God tore Northern Ireland apart.

i like the message. god is okay, its just how we use him that is bad.

pretty cool way to look at it

You got that right! (: Well although I agree with one of your earlier reviewers who said that it sounded more like a rant. Perhaps you might want to change the ending, instead of saying 'Thanks' to something else. I'm not saying this is utterly bad or anything, though! You've put your points across in a pretty interesting manner (the structure and all), so. Keep writing!

what the? I'm so freakin' lost! I hate being lost. Can someone help find me?

To me, that seemed more like a rant than a poem. I'm sorry.

o wow, I don't know what to say about this besides the fact that it has my head spinning with thoughts...Great job.