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| magalina 2006-10-07 ch 3,  | abuseLuvvins Kitty Loserpie! XD Great start! I wanna know what happens next! Please update soon... sometime :) |
| Esquirella 2006-06-13 ch 3, | abuseUncle Scott sounds pretty cool. I think Edan needs to spend some time with someone who "gets" him. |
| Evalynn 2006-06-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt jumps around a bit, but that's fine for the way it seems to flow; it could just be me since I'm odd like that. He, Edan, is likeable enough, even though little has been learned about him, and I'm very curious to see where you're taking this. All of your stories are interesting reads, and I mean that in a good way, of course. Keep going, I'd like to know more. Oh and, if I lived in Indianapolis, I'd go with you, but I'm stuck in CA; whoo...^~ |
| Esquirella 2006-06-01 ch 2, | abuseEdan's instantly lovable in this chapter. |