 Evalynn 2006-06-12 . chapter 3 It jumps around a bit, but that's fine for the way it seems to flow; it could just be me since I'm odd like that. He, Edan, is likeable enough, even though little has been learned about him, and I'm very curious to see where you're taking this. All of your stories are interesting reads, and I mean that in a good way, of course. Keep going, I'd like to know more. Oh and, if I lived in Indianapolis, I'd go with you, but I'm stuck in CA; whoo...^~ |