Hey red, it's tsukita-sun from MangaBullet. T-T That was absolutely amazing! Though there are some minor errors that I noticed and almost became puzzled, but I figured out what word you meant to use. Other than that...that was...wow. I could actually feel how the characters felt, and the pain seems so real! I'm happy that they reunited though, I was half-worried that they might not! I don't know much about Keron and Inu, but it feels like I can know a lot from just this story. Great job!

About the minor errors, would you like me to point out which ones I've noticed? Or maybe you'd like to re-read it yourself, because they're easily corrected errors. :O Either way works~! Asides from those tiny ones, there are maybe a few sentences that seem a bit awkward. I forget which ones though, because I was too absorbed into the story. >w

I think this story is wonderful. The ending is perfect and I definately love the song. ^_^ ReliantK is one of my favorites too.

Awsome job. I hope you write more about Inu and Keron.

Woah.. I like the love between the two of them(giggles).. anyweiz.. YAOI rockS!

Good job. xD I love the way you portray their emotions. [[pinches their cheeks and gets shot]] DX