 Ali Paige Axxx 2008-12-07 . chapter 19wow, is all I can say about this story. It made me laugh and cry and it was the best I've ever read! great job! :D |
 crayola.crayons 2008-04-27 . chapter 19This was a beautiful story. Good job. |
 Enaid 2007-10-13 . chapter 19ah ur story is like the circle of life ! the beginning goes back to the end and... svveet i like it. although the end is sad at least she can start over in a new town. great job! |
 moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-10-12 . chapter 19aw ... thats so sweet. :) love it!! XD |
 moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-10-12 . chapter 7:)
oh. my. god indeed.
:D |
 Kara Dee 2007-10-10 . chapter 19 ohmigod. wow. just...wow. that nearly made me cry, and i NEVER cry. its so beautifully written my simple words cannot explain. you are awesome. :] |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 19You made me cry for real this time. Jeez...all these depressing stories I'm reading lately.
Well, that was a wonderfully story sweetie. I'll have to go work on Constancy now. Keep writing!
Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 18Lol...Kennedy Park. Classic. Oh wow...nice little drama here. YES! Way to go Mea! That was great. Loved it.
OMG...now he's dying and...crap...I'm nearing tears. One more chapter I think...maybe two. Gotta go read.
Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 17I agree. Hospitals are creepy...I hate them too. Wow...way for Rob to shove Mea into the social scene. Short review, but I gotta read more. Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 16wow...sharing embarrassing stories over a campfire. How romantic. Aw man. I sorta wanted someone to interrupt the kiss for some comic relief. Oh well. Ooh...now mea plots semi-revenge. Off to read more again.
Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 15Mea seems a little drama-queen-ish. I understand...it's all very tragic and hard..but still. She sorta bugs me. I think I like Evan though. He's all wise and cool
Off to read more. Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 14Yea...I definitely read these chapters before...just skipped the whole reviewing aspect I believe. So yea...great chapter, sucky review. Either way you prolly dont' care due to the fact that I'm WAY behind.
Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Lola Maria 2007-07-06 . chapter 13Hey! I know I'm like...WAY behind on all your stories. I just never seem to find time anymore. I'm so sorry. I'll work on it this summer to get all caught up w/ your works though.
Huh...I think I read this chapter already. It seems eerily like Twilight or New Moon or something...yea, New Moon more of. I don't know...kinda odd.
Great chapter, off to read more.
Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~ |
 Libby 2007-06-02 . chapter 19 Hold on... I need to wipe the tears from my eyes before I can type something clever. That ending was so sad. But I loved it. I absolutely loved it. Way to go Vira. Way to go. |
 Amazed 2007-04-08 . chapter 14 this story is...the most beautiful and touching story that i have read in the 15 years of my life. it made me laugh and cry because i lost my grandmother and my best friend to cancer and this was just ...wow. thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this and Vira Fern you are a GREAT writer and always remember that. sincery,
AMAZED |