I love how it starts out with the opposites being clearly defined as opposite, even if you cannot tell which is which, until the line falls away and there is no longer any way to tell them apart . . . and yet you still can't stop moving. Describing it as "dancing" was a nice touch. Very nice!

I love this! *favs*

I like it! You're a great poet!

Yay! I did enjoy reading this. It's very well done! I like it lots and lots! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^