THIS IS SO GOOD... I like it. It's a great start... Is really interesting... I hope you update... please? even if is just for a kind person that happens to review this awesome story. PLEASE... I love the way she has no clue of someone that has been there as long as she has! lol okay bye PLEASE UPDATE.

I like the story. It's very nice and it's something people can relate to. Please continue the story.