is this story still in the works? because i'm really rather fond of it and sincerely wishing to see more. i'm complete enamored of tori and cat, although the latter occasionally makes me want to slap him about a bit for being so dense...but i guess we have to forgive him his differences. mme selene, however...i could happily chuck her off a cliff. honestly, to be so insensitive. i really would love to see more of this. so tell me, how are you [or your muses] best bribed?? ;)

Why do you do this to me?
You write a story that grabs my attention, then don't finish
...
*pouts*

no! there must be more! Ah! This story is so good, I'm really sad that there doesn't seem to be any more. Thank you for writing it though, it's fantastic. I really do hope you find time and inspiration to continue it at some point! Thanks again! --jess

aw. coo. aww XD *smirk* faveyo i wonder if i've added you yet. i'm adding too many people perchance, but they deserve it, the stories not so much... but this is the second awesome story i've read, and i'm sure there's more.

Such a great storey. I was getting jealous just reading it.. That **.. Anyway, I loved it and hope for more.

Ja ne!

~Sesshy

great story, amusing and well thought out...update soon!

where is the rest of the story? please update.

Oh gosh >.< I hope you write more soon, I'm enjoying this very much.

This is lovely. Slightly confused as to what Selene is doing?

Love this. The way you write each chapter like a stand-alone, but together make one larger story is admirable and Tori's constant stream of consciousness is entertaining to read. Your portrayal of cat is marvelously unique and very cat-like.

Can't wait to see how Tori and Cat deals with the green-eyed monster! Update soon!

Aww, it turned out so cute and nice. I'd like to see more of these characters, if you choose to do it. As much as I love the sex, I kind of liked there not being such a profusion of it in this story just because the little disappointments Tori experiences make the whole thing more endearingly human.

That speech about dirt being beautiful was... beautiful. I agree, but then I've always been the treehugger type. Also, the images it called up of Cat wearing nothing but smears of mud didn't hurt matters.

I also liked the way Seril tried to warn Tori of Cat being dangerous, and he actually only succeeded in making him worried about Cat being *in* danger. You can tell where each of their priorities are.

A teacher/student S&M dungeon in the basement of the school... that's why ppl heard moans... HA! That's the funniest thing.

And Cat offered to teach... and it involves hot wax... this is really something else.

Damn, I wish we had models like that in my art class... we did do nudes, but they were either old men or skinny, skeletal women, no one really attracticve and certainly no one interested in being petted.

Hehe of course Cat would think Tori feels bad for the completely wrong reason. I love these naive characters.

The discussions on whether or not lust is present in some situations gives me impure thoughts about Tori demonstrating exactly what lust is.

This is such a cute story.

I feel so sad for Tori! And if he wants any help I can kill Selene for him, or bind her up by a tree so that she can't follow, Cat should really get to feel what Tori is feeling, make Cat jaelous over something, or at least he should understand that Tori is jealous!

DON'T FOLLOW MY ADVICE, KEEP WRITING WHAT YOU WANT IT'S MORE INTRUGING THAT WAY, OTHER TIMES WHEN PEOPLE FPLLOWED MY ADVICE THEY GOT WRITERS BLOCKS!