evil evil man. ah who is he. i cant believe Jerrod died but at least Vyya gave him justice (stupid Ziek you thought you were smarter than Vyya *shakes head*)
cant wait for the next part should be very interesting

No way is it Jerrod. that's all i have to say

so Vyya seems really quick and might be the last but who says that the Last has to be one person maybe both of the twins working together = the last idk well im off to read more tt4n

haha i love Ydorb he reminds me of a character in one series i read by T A Barron. Ugh that assign i hope she killed herself instead of the baby!

falling through time... could be fun.

twins! so cute.

hey! when does the updating comes!no presuing, only encouraging, you know...

Nice, nice, nice! you made me to hate Ziek! i want a yordob! (or what was his name?) he´s so cute and funny!! when´s the next story? congrats...

awesome. screw harry potter- can't wait for the next one of these.

No! *cringe* well, i knew it was Zeik anyway, right when that note came, but i was confused about the men during tbe masque, will they be mentioned again and will their true identities be finally revealed?? You can't end a story like that, it shouldn't be called an epilogue. Gr. O and I thought that the reference frame in this story is a bit mixed up, i mean it flows very well, but to me it seems the Vyya gets everything. I mean she can fight, get the guy, and can paint, and also has the dark past. The importance of Yve and Lyrra is not quite clear, because usually in a threesome friends, each would have a special capability. I know they have different personalities, but their capabilities are not stable. Do you get it? And if all three is important, don't we need to know their past as well? How come Yve gets the magic? I mean out of all people from her world, why her? So there must be a specialty on her too.

Okay so basically what I'm trying to say is that the story is amazing, but i'm not sure where each of these character stands. Which ones are important, there's no balance. And yeah, PLEASE continue the story. *pleading* and gives *cookie*

Whoa. I think this has been the quickest updated story e-v-e-r. Tortous week, and by the end, the whole think is in Epilouge. BTW, I"M FRE!

ok, me gonna read ur story now, then i'll put in something usefull, but i love ur other stories too.

since lyrra is the seducer and Vyraa is the warrior, can Yev have some special and unique talent too? like maybe she has a special control over animals. UPDATE SOON, YA HEAR?

lol, this is going very well, very fast... dude, 12 chapters in a single day? props.

wow, i got the whole sisters thing last chapter... dude this is insane, keep it up lol

lol, now who's being confusing? hahaha. but very good so far, excellent as a sequel. i'm wondering though, Lyrra and her missing sister are actually Sarra and Marc's daughters?