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| mylittlechangingtruths 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseits beautiful. i love how you used those lovely metaphors to describe not only how they felt about you, but about them. the stain your mother tried to scrub away... its great. |
| Thursday Mourning 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseO... I loved this! It's sad and defiant at the same time. "Hurting me with every step/But I hurt him too" is a perfect example of 'its-not-totally-your-fault'that is rarely seen. Keep it up!~V |
| Hope.And.What.Not 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abusewow that is god! |
| Princess-anna57 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseWow! Very good! ^_^ Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| MonsterGirl 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWoW! O.O this is really nice ^^ |