i really love esmerelda.
i like centering around green. green for a color, and green for envy. it's an amazing, eloquent piece of work.

i didn't like the rest that much.
i felt they were just... outshined, for lack of a better word, by esmerelda.

oh wow...i like these.
but, I would take out all the italicized words in parenthesis (in EVERY poem), they're absolutely useless. The don't leave anything to the imagination, they state the obvious. oh and in the poem "outline" you could take out the line "...i suppose you've figured that out already" it's just not important I don't think.

I really find it interesting that you called poem 5 "outline" b/c personally, I would switch the titles of poem 5&6... i think it'd make more sense.

I really love the first two lines. The imagery there and the rhyming is spectacular. Very nice. This collection shall go on my faves. Wonderful job with all the poems. Keep writing! :)

Another very nice, somewhat ambiguous poem. I love that you say "but i would say yes or no" rather than just saying you'd say yes, because it's so true. It could go either way. And then you assume this other person knows that already. Whether that's a sarcastic statement or not, I'm not sure, but it works. Nice. Keep writing! :)

Aww, this one is sad. I love the second and third stanzas of this. They're very mature, and the second stanza alone is amazing imagery. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)

This is nice. One of those little statements that's just so sarcastic and it just works. Keep writing! :)

Another gorgeous poem. I love that you wrote an entire poem simply around what color eyes people have or would like to have. I loved "poisonivy green" and "skeleton arms." Those two descriptions are top-notch. The last stanza kills me. Gorgeous work again. Keep writing! :)

Oh, that was so pretty! I love that you repeated the first and last lines, the imagery in the 2nd and 3rd lines, and how you wrote "icantasteyourheartbeat." In short, I loved everything about this piece. Simply perfect. I think I'll read the rest before officially putting this on my faves, but know that I love this. Keep writing! :)

For such a short, general poem this was beyond amazing. Beyond words.I really love your work.It's inspiring and leaves me with this feeling of creativity and a different perspective on subjects like this."I can taste your heartbeat" is the only sentence I've ever stared at for more than ten seconds (not counting when I pretend to be reading).

These poems are the story of my life. No joke. You don't even know...are you stalking me? =P Amazing, amazing stuff you have here.

♥Christine

oh trust me.

this is amazing

reminds me of puzzles missing a piece.

arent we all just a type of wasting away?

it is hard, thus i never do

i always say see you later.because it would be sad to never see them again

5: i like how after those first 3 lines there's (such as love)... so... true. 'when i asked to spend/a little bit of forever with you.' i like that... and the last line...this whole thing was just ... great. : )

4: ohgod... i think i love this one the best out of all of these. it's just... amazing, and i dunno, i think i like it so much cos i can relate, and it's just written so good. 'and the confessions you dreamed of spilling/into his hands'. and the last two lines... wow... me liked.