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| Getuie 2006-10-23 ch 1,  | abuseIt's good that you don't limit your writing to one particular form. The shorter lines gave off that sense of loss... a choppy-ness that fits perfectly. I find it also wonderful that, while you use your own words, I can immediately think upon Scripture that say the same. |
| simpleplan13 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abusevery well written.. I like it.. especially the comparisons to other ppl |
| asha lie lee 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseits so good that you can find faith in jesus christ. i am not very religiously oriented, but i know it is so amazing to believe in someone and/or something and have total faith in them/it. |