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| Getuie 2006-10-23 ch 1,  | abuseAnother awesome piece of poetry. The flow of this is just amazing. You've crammed in so much without breaking stride. Going to my fav's. |
| Needa S 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm thankful, I have met Him! ^_^ Hey, ya asked me about my dream in, my Serenity poem. Actually no, I did not have the dream but Heaven is always in my sights. Ya know, what I mean? Anyhow back to your piece...Great descriptions and great flow as well. Excellent work. God bless you and thanks for your kind reviews. Write on! |
| KalinaGirl 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseYou are amazing chicka! I love you and miss talking to you like crazy! I hope everything is going well. I think I'll just email you since we really don't seem to be on the same time. But yeah, I got a new pen name, just letting you know! Hearts! |
| Maisha Mafuriko 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI agree...Good to have Posted as it were under "Love" rather than "religion" Excellant writings you have penned... of purpose.. "Receive A Blessing & Be A Blesing." Connie aka Maisha |
| D. A. Emme 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I loved this! ^_^ Don't ever quit writing for Jesus. You may be able to change someone's idea of just who this Jesus is. ^^ I like the line 'but he drank the cup of wrath and hell' And I also like the last three lines. The whole poem is good. |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. That is so deep. I loved the way you ended it. Also, it was cool how you listed and rhymed the majority of the sins we humans commit. Great poem. Keep writing! |
| simpleplan13 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI like how you didnt say who it was til the end... nice touch |
| asha lie lee 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abusevery nice use of the word "chastised" +^_^+ the imagery is just very powerful. you can FEEL the appreciation of it all |