hm i think we all have those points in our life where we wonder: is our life meaningful? is it purposful?
But all the dullness and chains around us seem to stop us from doing what we want to do,
make us underestimate our selves...

oki I'm losing my train of thought here... too late at night now,..

I really like some parts of the poem tho... others ( I didnt get the knife part or the end now that i think abt it) I am confused about them.
I like the first half of it though.

I liked it though I thought the lines were kind of short and could have stood to be longer.

Wow... just amazing, I really don't know what to say. The last few lines just made all the difference, and the last line brought it all together. I just... love it.

Nice work, well done! Write on!

~Anna~