I really love how you started this and I hope someday you pick it up and continue the story. It seems like it could be really interesting.

Sounds good... I'd really like it to continue

I really like this... the plot's great, thr grammar's amazing, it's all really good!! I thought since I liked your other piece of art I would check out another one.

If you could review my one work, I would REALLY appreciate it, especially constructive critism but anything you want to review is fine with me.

Thanks/Bye!

Sounds interesting so far - this has potential.

Love it! Continue!

I kind of lost where I was in "So Damn Smug" and I'm too lazy to re-read it. At least this one, I'll be able to follow a little better.

~Koyoru

Well, this certainly seems promising! :)Can't wait to read more. Nice introduction.

This is really good so far!! Keep updating:)

hey- this is really good! I hope you're going to continue it, I would really like to see where it goes...anyways, keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!!

ps- are you still working on So Damn Smug?

really great start :]