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saii
2006-08-15
ch 2,
abusePity you decided not to continue this story. I'd love to know what happened.
neongoldtooth
2006-08-02
ch 2,
abuseaww i love this, Glenn is totally cute.

write more!
BreathingFlames
2006-07-18
ch 2,
abuse*giggles hysterically* I love you! This fic is quite simply hilarious and I want more, dammit! Your characters make me squee...more please?
Cookies and Ice Cream
2006-06-22
ch 2,
abuseI really like this story it's funny and different. I love Glenn's sarcastic personality and Jared's cynicism. Can't wait for an update.
xanthofile
2006-06-19
ch 2,
abuseit's...odd. not sure what to make of the kid (i already forget his name, how pathetic of me) but i know he's pretty much a regular arsehead. still kinda like him, for all his vibes of me wanting to nail him to the floor and giggle as i make him cry like a sissy four year old on a huge roller coaster. yeah.
Kawaii Chibi Kitty Angel
2006-06-16
ch 2,
abuseHeh heh heh... you know, he may be an ** and all, but I really feel sorry for Glenn. Christ!

Hair doesn't taste good- neither do fists. Eugh. Poor guy.
KageNeko
2006-06-16
ch 2,
abusehahaI love it. very good update. Jared and Glen are awesome characters good job putting them togeather and making it work. A gay karma sutra book ^^ that makes me giggle. this has made my day thank you ^^ good luck on the next chapter
Nara Merald
2006-06-16
ch 2,
abuseNice. So will Glenn be able to get one up on Jared? I don't know what it is about your work but I love it!
Skeptic_Critic
2006-06-14
ch 2, anon.
abusePoor Glenn...I truly feel sorry for him...Not his fault he's in a bad mood from being shut up in a cross for years...I think I'd be too...Especially if they were pink walls...And I'd have smashed the infernal clock to pieces by now...Or at least tried to...

I can't wait to find out Jared's back story though...No one's that much of a jerk without reason...Usually...
DeadlyPinkPuchu
2006-06-14
ch 2,
abuseomg! heart! I'd say update soon if you hadn't updated today but eh...!

T'was nifty-awesome
Rhapsody's Shadow
2006-06-14
ch 2,
abuseI love it
SerialXLain
2006-06-14
ch 2,
abuseXD Jared is such a little **. Or is it not little because HIS is not little? Hm...

I still love Glen. He makes me giggle. The whole "I don't have a **" thing made me smile. Whe. Poor dude.

Hurray for your updates. ^_^

Love xoxo
Inherent
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abuseHaha, I love this. I'm glad I decided to read it. Yeah...
Skeptic-Critic
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abuseWow...I think I'm going to like this story even better than the last one of yours I read...And that's saying something...

who cares if it's blasphemious? It's interesting...

Wow...This is the third genie story I've read today..I think I'm starting another phase...Not that I mind...Especially since i love this kind of story...Kinda like Shaharazad's stories...
Casey
2006-06-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like them both! Oh my god. That was funny. Giggle giggle.
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