This story is totally freaking awesome!

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I love it so far! Ben is scary but very interesting.

I luv this story! I cannot wait for the later chapters.

This story has the perfect blend of humor and emotional complexes. I like that Page’s problem lies in not being able to express her powerful, dynamic personality vs. not having one at all (like so many of the ‘shy girl’ characters that try so desperately to exist).

I think that Ben is fast becoming one of my favorite fiction press guy characters (in part because he actually has one. Kudos!) I like this story so much that it has passed through love, straight into lurv.

I empathize with Macy; I also have a shit car. Oh how I hate it.

WRite on!Please!

holy hell i have read this again and i STILL love it, please update *wails then shoves zebra cake in mouth*

you love zebra cakes too? arent they fucking amazing, they are so god damn tasty its not even funny

I love the tree scene! He is such an awesome and stubborn character! And the whole grocery scene is great too because of the fact that he felt her up AND he actually had a purpose for it beside sexual harassment. By the way Ben is a great name.:) I love your story!

Poor darling Page...now if only she can keep herself in that spitting-mad mood when she sees him again...which I seriously doubt, then all should turn out well. No matter how shy you are, you should SLAP him...while holding a hedgehog in your hand...that would be nice...

This story is 's my favorite now. PLEASE update soon!

I like your story. It's very cool, but he's a real asshole, isn't he? shit. I wouldn't be able to just stand there and put up with it like Page... I'd have to kick him in the balls or something. what's her last name, by the way? I don't think you ever said...

I like it very, very much. Page is actually believable as a shy-ish, rather antisocial teenage girl. I really like her.

And then, of course, Ben is gorgeous ... (insert sigh).

I have just one question: In chapter one, Ben has green eyes, and in chapter three, he has blue eyes. I assume he wears colored contacts? (Sorry if I'm a little slow.)

Anyway, this is brilliant! Please update ASAP! (Tomorrow would be nice ...)

emmy

i love it, cant wait for you to update

Reading chapter two of your story at 5:55 in the morning is one of the few things that I can do and truly admit that I had a good time doing it (seeing as how I am NOT much of a morning person in the summer) So the point being, great job, you are a fantastic writer.

another perfectly executed chapter!

And if you could give me the brand name of that miracle bath solution...I might just try to send you roses...or give you ideas on how to bodily harm dear old Ben...

...a herd of five year olds with cattle prods sounds nice...

heeheehee, great stuff! Ben totally sniffed at her when he was intimidating her, makes me wonder how exactly he's planning on making her miserable.

Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ollie May