|Reviews for Evolution|
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 9
The way Page felt at the end of the chapter, I get that way a lot. I don't even like the stupid guy, we are just friends and he's free to see anyone he wants and date whoever, but when you just see him laughing happily and talking with that other girl, it makes you think that you're not good enough. You feel like less and start looking at what she has that you don't. Its a terrible feeling.
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 7
I read this! and I love it, that chapter was really cute and i'm really glad we got to see another side of Ben becuase he was so mean i legit started crying! but this made me smile so thankyou.
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 6
I still don't understand what Ben has against Page and how he can be so incredible heartless, but i'm glad that towards the end he kind of got a little bit better.
| Kat 3/11/12 . chapter 14
Page is so clueless! I want to simultaneously hit her on the head and give her a giant hug. I'm starting to like Ben more and more though. Really not liking the mom. Or the girlfriend. Why are they all so mean? :(
Aaaaanyway, you're an amazing amazing amazing writer! Say you have the next chapter ready to roll because the suspense is killing me (sadness ensues). And I will always have time to read this!
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 5
i'm wierded out and overjoyed at the same time that Ben is actually half decent to Page. Also, about Page's mother and father deal, I think her mom's a jerk and I can completely understand Page. I don't know how to describe it, but if my father were in a position like that, I would have trouble looking at him too. Not becuase I dislike my daddy, but because I love him so incredible much, and I wouldn't want anyone else to seem him in that weekness either. It's kinda like she's running away from reality and her mom is the real self centered jerk for saying that to her daughter in ch 4
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 4
okay well Ben seems unrealistically cruel and jerkish, I don't think anyone could harbor that much hatred for someone who had only spoken one measly paragraph about him. Also, poor Page's "best friends" don't really seem like that good of friends. I feel so bad for Page I want to go cry for her! Also, I totally called the Page Turner being her name cuz when I was little I starred in a play where the main character's name was Page Turner... ahhh good times...
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 3
If i were Page, i would honestly break down crying and punch that jerk in the face and kick him as hard as I could which could potentially hospitalize him seeing as I'm a soccer player!
| Tra-vation 3/11/12 . chapter 14
This story is so beautiful. I love it I love it I love it. I just spent my entire afternoo reading it and i love the name Ben now and I want them to get together and I want you to update the story. At first when I read that Ben didn't want to be her best friend I was saddened because I thought he didn't like her that much but then I re-read the statment and I was like OMG, HE WANTS TO BE MOREEE. 3 They need to confess to each other soon. I hope you update this story soon. It had an interesting start. I thought she was a little overdramatic and kind of pathetic and then the story got better after like chapter 3 or 5. I forget which one. And I love how she gets jealous because it's really sad. Jealousy tears people apart. And i love how he got sad that she went to the party because he's jealous. And I'm sad that her father is sick and no longer the person he used to be. Please update soon. I'll take within this month. But i'd probably have a heart attack if you updated within this week. 3 it, 3 you. Keep it up! :)
| nerdimaddi 3/11/12 . chapter 14
OMG AN UPDATE. can i repeat, as i'm sure i've told you several times before, that i absoluteley love this story? Page feels like such a part of me, with all her pent up rage and inability to talk to people. and her transition between socially inept to slightly less socially awkward is so brilliantly written. her character development is absolutley wonderful, and i love going through this story and seeing how she progressivley changes each chapter. and Ben! dear god did he misinterpret Page or what! she doesn't want to just be best friends you dingis! i mean seriously! that is reading way too much into her words. if anything he should be happy that, at this point, she considers him a best friend. it leaves doors open for... advancement in their relationship *wink wink nudge nudge* and i completeley understand Page's trepidition with the therapist. the first time i ever went to one i was forced to go by my father, and i wasn't any happier than she was. also, WOAH Rachel is a real bitch! maybe i'm forgetting part of the story (it has been a while since i've read it) but i don't remember her displaying such hostility! i mean i always thought she was a bit of a whore, but a bitchy whore is even worse. not to mention Cameron's passive aggressiveness. when Ben finally stepped up and told him to get the joint out of Page's face I was fist pumping the air for chivalry. and even if he didn't stand up for Page to his "friends" i'm glad that he atleast expressed that he didn't like it to Page. Hopefully he'll dump his "girlfriend" soon and get some decent friends.
can't wait for another update! keep up the great work! 3
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 2
okay so about my last review, i totally messed up the names, i mistook page for Macy... woops. But yah me and page are so similar its like i'm your character model, except I don't even know you! The part where Page collapsed, so many times have I felt like that! (Never actually collapsed though) but you forgot to mention how your mouth gets all dry and your lips get sticky.
| AoiLegend 3/11/12 . chapter 1
I really love your writing style! It's simple yet elegant and easy to relate too. I also love macy's character because i'm more or less like her! I'm wild and crazy around my circle of friends, but when it comes to strangers and hot guys, I lose the ability to speak in functional english sentences... I can't wait to read more!
| LadyMonstah 3/11/12 . chapter 14
Continue please? And jeez I am so frustrated! Cant Ben and Page just get together already? But at the same time I'm like nooo drag it out and keep showing their feelings change! Ugh. So conflicted lol. But I read this story in one shot, didnt evemw pause to go on facebook *gasp* lol. Keep writing :D
| renegade01 3/11/12 . chapter 14
I don't know who frustrates me more - Ben or Page...maybe they're both equally frustrating. ;) Thanks for the update.
| atomic-pocket-watch 3/11/12 . chapter 14
Rachel just became uber-bitch. why doesn't Ben just dump her? and it was funny how Ben was insulting her more than Page was. The banter was cute :D and and and and this chapter was pretty awesome :) when i saw the email with the link i did a little dance :P my mum walked in and she was pretty much like O.o :P but yeah you updated :D
| renegade01 2/12/12 . chapter 13
I'm glad I stumbled upon this story. I loved reading it. You definitely keep up with the humour side of things and made me grin. ;) I like Page and her friends and Ben. I don't quite get why she is the way she is when it comes to her dad - it seems a bit harsh when her mom calls her selfish but then I do wonder why she's so keen on avoiding any interaction with him. Maybe she doesn't want to face reality. Anyway, can't wait to read more.