Rhymes well and flows nicely. Can feel the descriptions as if they were dynamics (burning yet burning on - getting louder and what knowledge softly spoken- getting softer).

I liked the poem overall but, I don't think the title matches with the poem much.

I love the ending, but it takes away from it when you start with freeverse and then it looks like you switched to rhyming. It may be unintentional, though, and I realize that, so I'm just stating an opinion. I like your work, though. Great! _