hmm... i like it...where did the insparation come from? but its interseting!

This was pretty, but in a dark, cynical sort of way.

i really love that chorus especially that line about barbed wire smile.. great piece

Beautiful- especially "Twirl for the ladies and all the gentry". The chorus was awesome- the whole thing reminded me of a twisted nursery rhyme (which they all are). :) Keep writin'! `~bella~`