this is beautiful. im going through basically the exact thing right now and it always helps to know other ppl know what it feels like.

Very good. Beautiful use of italics and line length.

it's emotive.. so full of hurt. the use of italics is wonderful.. love, love. :)

i like this. me an dme friend are going thorugh something kind of like this. i can definitely relate. the writing itself is amazing though. keep writing!ur twizted tragedy

wow. This is awesome. I like how you put so much feeling in this. I think it good enough to publish, and not get you in trouble, unlike osme of mine...

I love this poem babe, it's so well written and it just shows in how much pain you are because of this person..But I just hope you won't let her bring you down anymore, because there are so many other people that do love you and would never try to hurt you _ So remember that, okay?

Love ya, x Rosanna.

Great poem. I know what it means to lose a friendship with someone. It happens allot now in school. Will read more in the future!

Byebye

I liked how this poem grasps the stuff that you two went through but to a lesser degree could describe what a lot of people have gone through (including me, but we've somewhat made up, even if it's awkward at times) keep up the awesome work :) p.s. I'm espicially fond of the title, it's very fitting to what you've said