that is officially the most spellbinding short story that i have ever read. I didn't want to stop reading, and was left in shock by the sudden conclusion.

I hope that as i read more of your stories that i am as enthralled as i was by this one, and hope that some day in the future i can become your "Beautiful Master"

I would kill to be able to write with the same flow as you. I'm often too shy with my work and my words get jumbled. The impression I intended to make isn't made and I put it down displeased. I can't begin to imagine the things you'll write with more experience under your belt. You had best keep contact with me while you're away, theres rare few people who's opinion I truely value in the art of words, yours, yours I will miss. Even oceans apart I'm still going to seek out your help. I loved the way that this peice was written, many it's just in my small dirty mind, but I love how erotic it is, in a dangerous way too, which just adds to it's appeal. (somebody will read this review and think I'm a complete freak so I'll end it here)I'll talk to you later.