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| Terence, the Terrible 2007-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseHeartbreaking and true. I love it (somewhat reminds me of myself...sans the hair to hide behind). Beautiful... |
| average-psycho 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abusehey. I'm glad you're updating again. I'm an old fan of yours. Now to this piece. The repitition of "To Hide..." really emphasizes the agony and the wish to escape. your diction is very nice. I like the imagery of "bakers's chocolate silk". Very nice. keep it comin' I'm so glad to see your back, many thanks your average-psycho |
| Princess-anna57 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good. This is written well! Keep it up! ~Anna~ ^_^ |