Heartbreaking and true. I love it (somewhat reminds me of myself...sans the hair to hide behind). Beautiful...

hey. I'm glad you're updating again. I'm an old fan of yours. Now to this piece. The repitition of "To Hide..." really emphasizes the agony and the wish to escape. your diction is very nice. I like the imagery of "bakers's chocolate silk". Very nice. keep it comin' I'm so glad to see your back,
many thanks your average-psycho

Very good. This is written well! Keep it up!

~Anna~ ^_^