Odd, but very interesting. It woul be coo if you expanded it and had her show "symptoms" and then end up doing 'that' to the guy she liked. I know I'd read it!

Hey-I'm new to the site but hopefully that won't make you think any less of my review.

So-love the story! You have a good way of writing naturally so tht it's easy to follow and interesting. Also, I like the part at the end about how the mother feels, etc...

Anyway-this is great! Keep up the good work