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| Xerophyte 2006-10-26 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa. The last line is intense. I love the title and how fitting it is. This is short, but it's good. I'm wondering what's behind the poem. My grandfather has gotten me thiking a lot about death lately. Thanks for your review of Traffic Lights...that was about him. This is really good, I just wish it was longer. -Xero |