I haven't been on this site in ages. But your work is beautiful, really admire it x

Well written and on a topic that I understand so very well. This piece is beautiful in its simplicity.
~Beth

There's such a longing in this piece as there has frequently been in your other ones... Simply worded, yet so powerful. The second stanza in particular was a beautiful image to me. Not many poets/writers I've read recently speak of the breath of God... gave me something new about God to consider.

I haven't reviewed in a while. Hoping to change that soon. :)

Hope you are well.
Be blessed.

Reminds me so strongly of a hymn. "cleanse away the sins I crave" shook me. We -do- crave and so desperately for all these things outside of God and yet, He alone is sufficient enough if only we would turn. Painful existence that only He can calm.

Love it. It really speaks to my heart.
btw, thanks for that awesome review.

Thsi is so inspiring and Beautiful.

"Brokenpieces of melie mendingin your hand."

I love those lines. Beatiful job.

*::~Cat~::*

wow. this poem is very impressive. i find it beautiful and poignant. the words flow so well. love it.marina(wings)

I liked your poem... Don't worry, He'll always be there for you :)

I really appreciate this poem, because it could have different meanings for different people and different religions. Personally the line "cleanse away the sins I crave" really applies to me, because I know the feeling of wanting something as much as you want it to go away. Keep up the good work.

I love the line "cleanse away the sins I crave".

I know I don't review very often, but I do like your work.