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| pixiepoptartz 2007-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseOMG, that's so sad! I teared at the end. ): This is SO well-written, you really made Annie's thoughts realistic. And you said you liked MY story? My story is crap compared to this! LOL. I totally favorited this. |
| bubbles47 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Omg I am crying!! She is so small and innocent. I wish she doesn't figure out that luekiemia is a type of cancer. One question though. When you are told that you have cancer or something it is usually more than three weeks to live? More like a month to live. I love the way that you are able to capture the emotions of the reader. One thing I wish to acomplish. How old is this girl. I was wondering is she was really short or if she had her legs amputated? Please teach me o wise one. Once again I LOVED IT! amazing sincerley bubbles. |
| tearitrightup 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusethis was really good! until the very very last sentence. it didn't match the mood you tried to set up in the rest of the story. |
| Caitlin Outerbridge 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI remember reading this before! It is so sad... again, another one of your stories that give me chills! I think you should make this into a longer story. Maybe, a few weeks leading up to the doctor's. Did she have symptoms? And then you could do the three weeks after until she dies. I would love to read that! xoxox Caitlin |
| Orual 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThe bit about leukemia being a girl's name is absolutely heartwrenching. You have certainly captured a child's thoughts. Just on a side note: I'm sure you know more about leukemia than I do, but three weeks sounds a bit short to me. The little girl says she doesn't feel sick, and I guess I'm inclined to take that at face value. Then again, I very likely don't know what I'm talking about. |
| Callisto Jean 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseYou just don't like having a happy ending don't you? No fairy tales for you, eh? Well, it's life I guess... Awesome work...as usual. P.S. I hope no one close to you has leukemia... |