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| Nemonus 2006-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. I think it goes from a real-world dreamer to a rather tragic fantasy hero and are they really the same person? That's cool. I like the lines "Fate may call us all but once this time/And I intend to heed this sweet symphony" and "Dispensing of the blurred faces in the crowd". |