I think i is a good poem, but if you are in a good mood then it is kind of depressing. But other wise I like it, are you going to put more poems up ?

Brilliant, and I luv you're skill with expression!

sad... I can't really relate since the only person I've known died when I was two, but if you hadn't said that this was about your grandmother, I would have thought it could be about anyone. Love the ending... sort of wistful, angry, and sad.

Great job