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One Sorry Story 2006-07-22 . chapter 1
I really liked this piece. It was very realistic in showing marriage, rather than a happy couple tearfully waving their children off to college. And the twist at the end with both of them sleeping with the accountant made me laugh a bit. It was just so unexpected. I enjoyed it very much ^^

(And in response to your review, thanks very much! ^^ And I know holding my story hostage for reviews is amateurish but hey . . . sometimes it works ^^')
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