This poem was one of your best poetries. One of my favorites from you. Your rhyming is at a level I've never seen before, and it adds to the feeling of the poem. Truly something anyone can learn of. A great work of art.
The Reverse Edge Blade

"So to find within one personBoth a jester and a seer"

Wonderful imagery! I have truly enjoyed reading this. Beautiful work, indeed. Well done.

true it is that you are clearly unclear...i love it...bb

How come you never tell me when you add something or update? I'm always way behind in reading it! I like this peom alot, In the begining I was like what the heck, this makes no sense (being as I don't read poetry very well and if it's a deep poem thats all twisty and stuff I have no idea whats going on. Stupid me. Peoms have to be clear for me to understand them) and then it cleared up...sort of. I'm dumb the begining still puzzles me but the rest makes sense. I know I should be able to understand it but I'm stupid, and I've been rotting my brain away on VH1 And have not been reading. Good job!

Wow... I really like this... It's very pretty.