|Reviews for Where|
| average.snarker 10/17/07 . chapter 1
Rarely do I stumble across a rhyme scheme I enjoy, yet you have done so. There is not much else to say, for I am stunned to find someone who understands stressed and unstressed sylables.
The Furtive Oubliette
| a silenced revolution 3/10/07 . chapter 1
I love that last line! I love it. I love it. I love it.
And I rather like the rest of the poem. Good work!
Hazellin (formerly Isabella May)
| Universal Empire 7/12/06 . chapter 1
I liked the flow of thie piece. Nice use of imagery too! Nicely written!
| KingdomRain 6/26/06 . chapter 1
i liked the rhymes... very good really... all in all i thought this was wonderful... keep writing
| bR0k3N 6/17/06 . chapter 1
this was really good... and yes I am reading all of your poems and going to review because I like your poems... heehee
| kathleen30263 6/4/06 . chapter 1
Excellent. I like the flow of this poem. Not the topic of course, but the flow of the words is great.