Rarely do I stumble across a rhyme scheme I enjoy, yet you have done so. There is not much else to say, for I am stunned to find someone who understands stressed and unstressed sylables.

Cynically Yours,

T.F.O.

The Furtive Oubliette

I love that last line! I love it. I love it. I love it.

And I rather like the rest of the poem. Good work!

Hazellin (formerly Isabella May)

I liked the flow of thie piece. Nice use of imagery too! Nicely written!

i liked the rhymes... very good really... all in all i thought this was wonderful... keep writing

this was really good... and yes I am reading all of your poems and going to review because I like your poems... heehee

Excellent. I like the flow of this poem. Not the topic of course, but the flow of the words is great.