Again, I say to you: amazing.

Very fantastic. Am having a slight issue with an over-enthusiastic Christian ex-friend right now, so this poem was perfect for the moment. Haunting and mocking verses-very striking.

One of the better poems I have seen on this site. The first verse as well as the last are just genius. However, the language (and I don't mean explicit language, I mean word choice) in some places such as the next to the last verse feels somewhat petty and not as literary as some of the other verses. Still, it is an excellent poem, and I will have to look at some of your other work.